Blog Post 2 - Leah Toebbe


Hundreds of bodies of Holocaust victims lay stretched into the middle distance in organised rows.
A destroyed building with a collapsed roof looms behind them.

Comments

  1. Leah,

    Great detail Leah. So sad how all of this happened but overall. Great Job with detail and noticed what happened behind the building.

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  2. Leah,

    Great job in providing lots of detail but there is nothing about your emotion or the emotion of the people. Overall if you added more emotion it would be excellent.

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