Buna; A good synonym for hell-wills

Buna; A good synonym for hell


I shall never forget,
The pipel:
His anger broke out
One of thirteen beating his father
The old man was crying softly,
How could it be possible?
I was frightened 
So I ran, and ran


I thought I had been running for years,
It was selection day,
I was summoned to the spot
I felt so weak
You’re too Thin, 
you’re too weak,
Was I written down?


Those whose numbers had been noted stood apart, 
Abandoned by the whole world,
Weeping in silence,
Soon to be forgotten.



Comments

  1. From Leah:

    I think you did well conveying emotion in your poem; especially in the last 4 lines, which were really powerful for me. It conveyed a sort of helplessness that you can’t help but sympathise for.

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