Post number 1- Stella
¨Jews, listen to me! That's all I ask of you. No money. No pity. Just listen to me!¨ (pg 7) After this when Moishe came back and told everyone all the things he saw i really consumed it all, that all of this was real. That it had all happened. I felt like as i was reading this in my head i could imagine him talking and him begging everyone to listen to him. After this, every page I read got darker and darker. I couldn't ever imagine going thru this. I thought it couldn't get any worse until i read what elie said to his father later on in the book. ̈ ̈If it's true, then I don't want to wait. I'll run into the electrified barbed wire. That would be easier than a slow death in flames.” (pg 33). I realized a boy not much older than me had to make these decisions that I could never think of making. The way Elie Wiesel writes is different then any book I have read. He has found a way to write about something so dark and keep the book going at such a quick speed but not overwhelm the reader. He used so much sensory detail but it does not take away from what was going on. I've never read a book where the author could do any one of these things and still keep the reader excited to read this book.
Nice sensory imagery, I liked how you kept the point concise without dragging it on too long. All you really need to work on is your capitalization and punctuation. I would also like to hear more about Elie Wiesel's writing style on the first quote. If you fix those things this will be a great paragraph!
ReplyDeleteI loved how much you described it as if you were there. I think that you could fix up your punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. You really put your feelings out there into the quote and really explained how you felt. Other than the grammar and punctuation I really liked your response!
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