Priscilla - Blog Post #2



Men and Women at the public market bargaining and selling their goods to support their families for what is about to come. 

Comments

  1. From Jared:

    Pricilla, you didn't really give that much information about the picture. Could you add a little more and tell me about where the picture is from, what time it was taken, and other things. But I like the picture tho.

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  2. From Leah:

    You used good descriptive words to paint a picture of what was happening but it doesn’t give much information about what they were about to face, if they knew what was going to happen, etc. Overall this was well written but it could be a bit better with an extra sentence or two talking about why they were there.

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